100 word challenge
Alex and I were on our way home on a misty night we decided to take a shortcut through
the graveyard. When we were walking we read a gravestone that said
if you are reading this the spirit of Crimson would haunt you. Just before alex freaked out he
murmured something like "crimson is back again". he started to shouted "you shouldn't have
come to my resting place." and he grabbed me. I frantically waved my hands to try to get him off
me. With one swift kick i knocked him off balance and ran. I thought I would never see alex again.
the graveyard. When we were walking we read a gravestone that said
if you are reading this the spirit of Crimson would haunt you. Just before alex freaked out he
murmured something like "crimson is back again". he started to shouted "you shouldn't have
come to my resting place." and he grabbed me. I frantically waved my hands to try to get him off
me. With one swift kick i knocked him off balance and ran. I thought I would never see alex again.
I really liked your piece of writing because it was exiting and gripping to read. A work on i think for you is make sure your sentences make sense like "He started to shouted.
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