Tuesday, 20 March 2018

Lochie 100 word

">The light flickers on and off repeatedly.When on it made and odd yellow color as it lit up the room and then plunged into a short darkness. There's always a unsettling feeling about the emergency room. The big doors leading into the rooms that contain a variety of people, some with minor injuries, some taking their last breath. Those poor people with consciousness slipping from grip and only hope to hold onto. The nervous caregivers waiting anxiously in the old worn hospital seats, thinking, how did he get up there ?

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