100 word challenge.
Bodies shaking like a cement road in the middle of an earthquake. Pushing on through the knee deep sea of white. We’ve been out here in this cold wilderness away from civilisation for days now. Searching for the enemy, looking for a fight. When i exhale out i’m a dragon cold air firing out of my mouth. We are conquering the mountains. As i look up i see my scout crouching next to frozen lifeless bodies of the enemy, how did he get up there? Then i remember my grappling hook throwing them up on the ledge and up we go.
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