““Reporting there was a brake in” said Dylan Rubes. Dylan is a FBI agent and has been for three years but of course there was a brake in on his three year anniversary. Dylan calls the head, James Lewis, James looked at the brake in and was confused. “The diamond? Most important object we have, how did anyone know and more importantly how did anyone get up there, it’s in a high secured vault in the top of our tower, we need to think” “I’m not sure but… Just then they heard a noise behind them, they turned around and...
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