100 word challenge
Only one has ever made it up, only one has ever survived and only one is ever seen light. How did he get up there. No one knows. People have tried but no one but him has managed to get out. There's only one way out and that's up. Tomorrow I will try and I will succeed from the son of the one who made it up. I will climb and climb and climb and I will keep trying and trying and trying. And I will make it up or I will die trying. Now it's tomorrow and now I try.
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