100 word challenge
‘Where is Johnny?” I asked as I stared at the empty spot where my pet goldfish, Johnny used to sit. Where could he have gone. For goodness sake, he’s a goldfish in a bowl he can’t move himself! I walked outside hoping the fresh air would clear my head and give me an idea where Johnny could be. I looked up towards the sky but something caught my eye. On top of our garage, swimming around in his bowl that looks untouched, is Johnny. I stare in disbelief, but how did her get up there! He’s still in his bowl!
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