Julia T1 W8
“But how did she get up there’’? Issy said. There is no way to even climb up that big tree because there is nothing for her to gab.”I don’t know how your sister got up there? But she must be a good climber,’’ Eli said. “Sis you need to come down now,’’ said Issy. As Issy’s sister was coming down, a branch from up top fell sand almost landed on Issys sister when she was coming down. It missed her and fell on the ground instead. When she got down her sister gave her a hug and a kiss.
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