It was a icey morning in Rosewood. Emily woke up to here this strange noise outside her window. She hopped out of her warm bed to see that there was a small dog up in there Willow tree. Emily's jaw dropped. She said to herself “But how did she get up there”. Emily knew it was a girl because it was there neighbors dog. Emily called out to her mum and the both ran out to the little dog. Emily's mum called there neighbors and then called the fire brigade to come and get her down. Lucky she wasn’t hurt.
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