It's 10pm at the empire state building there is a boy standing at the very top readying to jump.
But how did he get up there. Well to answer this question all we need to do is look at his text
messages so what lies on this app? Text messages of course most of these venomous.
As the boy looks at his phone a new text message appears, it’s from a kid at school he knows it reads
“wanna be friends?” the boy looks at his phone and thinks. After thinking for a bit he decides he should
go home.
But how did he get up there. Well to answer this question all we need to do is look at his text
messages so what lies on this app? Text messages of course most of these venomous.
As the boy looks at his phone a new text message appears, it’s from a kid at school he knows it reads
“wanna be friends?” the boy looks at his phone and thinks. After thinking for a bit he decides he should
go home.
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