Monday, 19 March 2018

Lucas 100 Word Challenge

We need to get David off the mcdonalds sign. But how de he get up there? I think someone taped him up there. “David how did you get up there.” yelled his dad. “I climbed up here and the police were at the bottom so I didn't want to come so I taped myself up here” said David David has now been up there for three days. The tape is starting to get weak David is now in danger. the tape has given out davids falling in an effort to break his fall he landed on his dad’s leg.
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  1. Anonymous30 July 2018 at 14:02

    perhapes you could add more discripteve words

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