Wednesday, 5 September 2018
Emma Descriptive Writing T2 W7
As the warm sunlight rises over the magical forest, the flowers begin to spread open their petals, as they slowly wake up. The water shimmers like thousands of stars, as the light hits it's surface. Insects filling the clear air, searching for a feed, trees towering over the forest like clouds covering the sun from earth. Animals instantly coming out of their homes, ready to start another day in paradise, as the world around them awakens. The trees rapping each others arms together becoming one, as they know it's time to bloom their decorations.
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