Sunday, 9 September 2018

Nuo Descriptive Writing T3 W7

Walking on the rough road, the soil beneath is moist. Suddenly, I stopped. What I saw was stagnant water. The water was dirty and there was some duckweed. Without the duckweed, the water reflected the scene on the shore. The surrounding roots were thick and intertwined, and there was some algae hanging on them, which seemed a little frightening. The stalagmites on the ground are uneven, like shrinking peaks. Leaves rustle and sunlight falls through the gaps between the leaves, causing evaporation of water on the ground to form water vapor, adding a bit of mystery to the scene. The moss, which was dry on the trunk, was red, like a coat for the trees.

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