Monday, 18 June 2018
100 wc w8 julia
One day there was a man called Hulk he was a very strong man. One day he was walking down the street when suddenly a man ran out of the bank with money, lots of it. So Hulk ran after the man, but Hulk didn’t know that the man had ……. A GUN. When the man saw Hulk he stopped running. Hulk saw the man's hand go to his pocket which had a large object. Hulk just guest that it was a gun saw he got ready to grab the gun with his own bare hands……..
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