Sunday, 17 June 2018
T2 W8 100WC
I clutch my 50 cal sniper. Target 1.5 km away “BOOM”! The blood rush’s through me.hit but they have seen me. My team proceed down the mountain to met them in the valley. I take another cheeky shot “ALLU AKBAR” i hear. We sprint as they open fire on us. One by one my men are plucked off by copper shrapnel. They start to push towards us we run towards a bush on the other side on the mountain. We hide behind a thorn bush. My silenced revolver pulled out “boom boom boom” the emmys are down. great job boy.
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