Sunday, 17 June 2018
Ashleigh W8 T2 100wc
I got to the white line, my heart beating fast, I couldn’t breath. “On your marks, get set” and the gun went off, I was running with all my might. There were so many people cheering for me “go go go!” It was an amazing feeling, I felt like no one could stop me. The last ten metres came up, I was second I gave it everything and he started to slow down. I then passed him and I realised ‘ I’m gonna win!’ I crossed the finish line with the biggest smile on my face knowing I won the race.
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