knotted gun story
Beep,beep that's the battle bus I jump off. I head straight to tilted towers I look behind me I see 20 people. I land on top of a building I hear a chest I destroy the roof. I open the chest and I got a legendary revolver I was confused because one you can’t get revolver and it had a knot at the end. I go out in the open I shoot at ninja and Ali-a when I shot cats came out. Then out of the blue I had cleaned out the whole lobby victory royal.
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