100 Word Challenge
I'm Doctor Vanrover and this is how it all went wrong.
I'm a supervillain and i'm going to destroy New York city but it never happened. My plan was to build a statue of a gun and say it 'represented how well the city is protected', but secretly I was going to build a cannon inside and destroy the city!
It was great until Grey Shadow, the cities superhero discovered my plans and ruined everything! I was about to shot my cannon when he ran towards the gun. He jumped, grabbed the end and twisted it in a knot!
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