As the light shined in my eyes, I could hear people screaming and cheering as the circus started. Finally the light moved to a different part of the crowd, as I slowly opened my eyes, the world around me changed. Everywhere I look, something I thought to be impossible was being done.
Suddenly a man with muscles the size of my head, stepped forward with a gun. He held it high in front of himself and started twisting it into something. When I finally go a good look, I saw that he had tied it into a small knot.
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