Hi my name is gun I'm pretty cool my life was going pretty good until today it was 9 o'clock my owner picked up me up off the table and put me in his holster then he walked out to the car then when suddenly I fell out of the holster I was like pick me up and he just left me there I was depressed I was just lying there on the ground crying and then I had discovered that at the end of my body I had snapped this this is the end for me goodbye world I hope he remembers me
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