My name is George and today, exactly a year ago, I discovered my super power.
I could see out of the corner of my eye that I was being followed. I started to run but he ran after me, I turned down what I thought was a side street, but was a dead end. The man pulled out a gun and I thought that was it, but then something in my brain clicked. I sprinted over to the man, grabbed the gun and tied the barrel it in a knot. That was the day I realised I had super strength.
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