Tuesday, 24 July 2018
100 Word Challenge.
I can vividly remember strolling carelessly. There was a blank hill plonked in my path. Annoyed, I continued on, paying no attention to my aching legs. Once I had trudged my way up the mound, I paused, as I looked over the edge. It was a Car... Yet, there was something staring at me. Cautiously, I crawled down a slope located by the vehicle. Standing before it, I traced the empty, greasy slot in the front of the car. I peered over the edge of the car seat and I noticed a pair of green eyes, glaring at me!
Written by Catherine, 25/07/2018.
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I really love the storyline of this story, I would just make sure to double check all my grammar
ReplyDeleteThink about adding the prompt (Unless i'm blind)
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