"Let me take you back to the day I did the sky tower bungee jump."
"To start of with it had been raining all morning so I wasn't even sure I was going to be able to do the bungee jump. Eventually the rain passed and I was able to do the bungee jump. Standing in the elevator was like torture because my legs were trembling and I couldn't contain myself because of all the nerves. With all fear and worries aside I finally jumped.
Thinking back about it doesn't even sound that bad, but I assure you, it was!"
Sunday, 29 July 2018
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I really liked how you set up the story
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