Monday, 30 July 2018
100WC T3 WK1
The indulgent sound of rapid white water fills my ears . The wooden planks cuddled my feet from the long drop below. The man who tied my feet told me it was his first day forcing me to cough up a weak smile. When I looked over the edge I saw rushing wind blowing past my face ,as the bottom of the gorge grew closer to my face . But in a split second my body was met with a cold awakening of ;deep blue water and hard rocks. And instead of a springy cord pulling me up, I got bungie death.
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I really loved all of the descriptive words. I really like it when you explained what you saw. Next time try and show your feelings a bit more.
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