Sunday, 29 July 2018

Will T3 W2

It had been raining all morning which didn't help lightning up the atmosphere in the classroom as Mrs rose our latern teacher came in and started handing out homework and assignments for our holiday. Me and Alfies mouths drop as we saw the stacks off sheets that needed to be done. "I can't be stuffed I yelled." The whole classroom fell silent with people all over the room giving me weird looks and just as Mrs rose turned around to give me another one of here huge telling offs Alfie stood up pushed his desk over and said " Yea this stuff is stupid" within five second the whole class had turned into a zoo with tables and chairs being flung across the room. I'm just thankful  lying on my bed writing this that i'm not doing BLOODY LANTERN!
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  1. Anonymous31 July 2018 at 21:09

    nice work I like the story line

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  2. Anonymous7 August 2018 at 19:59

    I really like this story! Remember that Latin is spelt L-A-T-I-N not Lantern.

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  3. Anonymous7 August 2018 at 20:03

    I liked the way you said "which didn't help lightning up the atmosphere in the classroom". Next time remember that when you use the word "I'm" the letter I needs to be in a capital letter. Great job 👍😃😁

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