I woke up in a daze, squinting at my surroundings. I soon realized I was planted in a hospital room. Then it all came back.
The eyes, the car... Soon enough, I began hyperventilating after what felt like forever, I was released. I breathed in the cool air as I began to stroll to my car, I sat there, retrospectively looking over everything from this week, I sighed and continued home. It had been raining all morning when I got home, Sighing, I continued reading, Tired from the events. Then, I noticed someone outside.
It was the same haunting eyes.
Tuesday, 31 July 2018
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I really like the way you describe the environment and let people immerse themselves in it.
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