It was a sunny morning. Me and my friend decide to go for a walk. We had been walking for about an hour, walking along a cliffs edge, then we hear this weird noise. We look at each other and start running to where we heard the noise. We look over the edge and see this rare bird, protecting her eggs. Because other birds are attacking her. Me and my friend try to find a way down the cliff to help the bird. Finally we find one. We quickly climb down and shooed the birds away. The mother thanks us.
Monday, 23 July 2018
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I really liked the way you said what you were doing all the time and the way you described the bird.
ReplyDeletePerhaps you could say the way you got to the nest and fix shoe - shooed the birds away.
Harriet,
ReplyDeletethe story was very good and I really enjoyed it. Just remember to check your spelling next time.
Harriet,
ReplyDeleteYour story is really cool, I like how you descriptive language. Just remember to double check your spelling.
Nice work overall!