100 word challenge.
I woke to the sound of an frantic knock on the door at 2am in the morning ,who the hell goes knocking on doors at this hour? i thought. Slowly i pulled myself out of bed and thought if this is some joke they have no idea what they were in for. I creacked the door open a crack and was surprised to see my former colleague from myspace investigation company. “Sir he said an astroid just hit a farmers field afew miles away you ought to see it now “. When did it arrive? I said. 5 hours ago he exclaimed.
I really liked your storyline and the way you used "When did it arrive?' Make sure that you use capital capital letters "I"
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