’When did it arrive?’ I yelled as I came running
up the stairs to the serquirty Auckland harbour.
Weeks ago we had made a breakthrough discovering
that a monthly shipment of cocaine was being ship
from columba in barrels of commercial cooking oil.
If you think about it its a master plan because sniffer
dogs find it very hard to smell the substance when the
prodoment smell is oil. But if the sniffer dogs were to
smell cocaine the officer wouldn't want to ruin an a
thousand dollar barrel of oil just because
they think there dog mite have smelt something.
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