One week ago I ordered a Spy Drone© for my son Mo, It was supposed to arrive in 2 days but it's been a week and it still hasn't come. I was starting to wonder what was taking it so long, I called the company to ask when it's coming. They said it was already here
"when did it arrive?" I said. They said when it was supposed to come, I was really confused at first but then I heard a buzzing sound I went outside and saw my son Mo playing with the drone.
Monday, 7 May 2018
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I really like how your writing was funny. Next time you could use more descriptive language.
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