Monday, 7 May 2018
LucasM 100WC T2W2
I was walking home from school when I saw my brother take a package out from the letter box. He looks at me and runs inside. I walk inside and hear my brother running up the stairs. I go up stairs and into my brothers room as I walk in I see my brother putting something in the closet. I ask him’’have you seen my package?” ‘’No’’ he said in a worried voice. Two weeks later my brother walked into the lounge wearing my shirt that was meant to arrived two weeks ago. “When did it arrive?” I said.
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I enjoyed reading this because I like how you made the brother steal his package
ReplyDeleteNice writing Lucas next time you could use more descriptive language.
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