Tuesday, 8 May 2018
Nuo Chen 100wc T2 W2
At the holiday,I went back to China and bought a keyboard for my phone on the internet. Because I wanted to play a game called PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds. But I don’t have a good computer to run it. So I decided to play it on my phone.
On the last day in China,before we went to the airport. I remembered I have bought a keyboard,which haven’t come . I didn’t think I can get it in such a short time,so I gave up.Then I found my new keyboard on the table.”When did it arrive?’”I said.
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I enjoyed reading this because it was interesting and I liked the way that you set yourself a problem and fixed it in the story.
ReplyDeleteNext time you write remember you put a comma or a full stop straight after the word then space (example:
holiday. I)