Monday, 7 May 2018

julia 100 wc t2 w2

‘’When did it arrive’’? I said. ‘’It arrived today just after you left for school’’ mum said. ‘’Can I go play on it’’? I said.  ‘’Have you finished your homework’’? Mum said. ‘’Yes’’ I said. ‘’Ok go have some fun on your go kart’’ mum said. So I went to the garage and saw my new go kart I was so excited to jump onto the seat and do some tricks. So I jumped onto the seat and did some tricks. It was so much fun. Then after about an hour mum said ‘’it’s time for dinner’’!  

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