Wednesday, 9 May 2018
term 2 week 2
ding the clock strikes 12 i run down the misty allie way and jump over fence there it was the dilevery truck there was only one thing stopping me and that was trafic franticly i sprant ocross the road to the other said were the truck had parked i was running out of time when suddenly the post men dissipered in to thin air along with his truck i said to my self did that just happen sprinted like acheater to the next bus stop. when did it get here 500 years ago whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat!
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ReplyDeleteI like the way you described how you ran and what you were doing all the time. But you need to check spelling and punctuation because it doesn't quite make sense.
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