Tuesday, 1 May 2018
Emma T2 W1
"Don't forget to buy some milk" mum shouted as loudly as she could, as I frantically ran out the gate. As I sprinted to the shop, my heart started to race and my breathing became heavy. Gasping for air, I decided to walk for a little bit, knowing that I would probably pass out if I keep running. As I started to walk, I suddenly realised that it was very misty and that I was in the cemetery. So I decided to put some crimson coloured flowers on my great grandmother's grave. After I finally made it to the shop.
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I really liked it because it showed me that you were in a big hurry.
ReplyDeleteI don't know why you are hurry but you took some time to put flowers on your great grandmother's grave.That was very respectful.
"that I would probably pass out if I _kept_ running. "
I enjoyed reading this because it was exciting.
ReplyDeletePerhaps you could change keep to kept.