Tuesday, 1 May 2018
Harriet T2W1
In a land far away, there were 5 young boys. They had all grown up together. Next to their houses, was a grave. Next to the grave was a field of flowers that they liked to play in. One day they boys were playing in the field of flowers and then they saw a man walking past. The man had seen them to. He started to chase them. The boys freaked out, one of them shouted "CRIMSON MISTY FRANTICALLY GRAVE". The boys ran to the grave, the man chased them but gave up when they got to the grave.
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I really like the way you said where everyone was and what they were going.
ReplyDeleteYour last sentence does not quite make sense.
I really liked the start.
ReplyDeleteThe last sentence is a little incoherence.