Tuesday, 1 May 2018

Julia T2 W1

One day Dana and her friend Misty Grave went to the park and started playing on the swing. They both felt like having an ice - cream so they went to the dairy. Dana and Misty Grave got to the dairy and started choosing an ice - cream Misty Grave choose hers quite quickly and Dana couldn't choose between strawberry and chocolate. So Misty Grave went to the counter and saw a dead man. Misty Grave shouted frantically at the man covered in crimson blood. Then Dana ran, slipped and died.   
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  1. Anonymous1 May 2018 at 14:43

    I really enjoyed reading this because it was funny and a all round a good story.
    A work on could be adding a bit more language in this sentence
    'Then Dana ran, slipped and died'

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