The mist was quietly rolling in. I have never felt this earthly quietness before,
it felt like my stomach was being tied in a not.
I was in tears placing a beautifully crimson rose on my grandmas grave.
I couldn't take it anymore I shouted, I shouted at the top of my voice why! Why! Why did this
have to happen! The anger in my body was frantically trying seep out in any way,
hitting the ground with my fist or shouting at the top of my voice.
I then said goodbye an ran as fast as I had ever ran before.
it felt like my stomach was being tied in a not.
I was in tears placing a beautifully crimson rose on my grandmas grave.
I couldn't take it anymore I shouted, I shouted at the top of my voice why! Why! Why did this
have to happen! The anger in my body was frantically trying seep out in any way,
hitting the ground with my fist or shouting at the top of my voice.
I then said goodbye an ran as fast as I had ever ran before.
I really liked the way you described the rose that you put on your grandma's grave, because I could picture what the rose looked like.
ReplyDeleteI think you need to work on checking your spelling because there are a few spelling mistakes.