Tuesday, 1 May 2018
Josef term 2 week 1
“WE NEED ONE ORDER OF NUGGETS” the KFC employee shouted after I placed my order. 5 minutes later however, the cashier told me they don’t have any chicken nuggets.I started to frantically scream, “NOOOOOOOOO” as I ran through into the misty car park and onto the road, ignoring the grave danger I was in as a crimson car swerved around me.I had to walk all the way to the police station where I told them all about the horrible situation at the KFC. BUT THEN I GOT ARRESTED FOR RUNNING ON THE ROAD!.
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I really liked your writing because it was clever and humorous Next time you write try to add a bit more detail i know it's hard because you can only use 100 words.
ReplyDeleteWell done Josef, that was very humorous. I really like the way you incorporated humor into it. It made me laugh.
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