Monday, 13 August 2018
100 WC W4 T3
My bad dream was cold. It was dingy in my room almost dingy I looked quickly at my old bedside table The clock read 12:07. My closet door slowly creaked open. I slowly got out of my bed, why did I do that? All of a sudden I felt dirty claws dig into my chest I look to see a wolf of kinds sinking his sharp talons into my chest. Just then I woke up from my horrible dream. But the clock still read 12:07 and the closet door opened slowly.
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