Wednesday, 29 August 2018
Storm Rage
The dark dull waves cascaded onto the sharp rocks, shattering the deep tide. Relentless weather sent a big white tip high into the air and slammed it down upon the unfortunate structure. Bulky waves brewed in the heart of the downpour. Murky brume surrounded the light house and it was all over within a matter of seconds.
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