Why would I do this why on earth would I do this I said. No! My answer is No!
I yelled. Why would I walk up mountain in hope of finding a unicorn that you
said will carry us to a land which is probably fake and on this land there will
be giant maltesers and marshmallows the size of africa like how is that possible
if a ant was enlarge the same amount as the marshmallow the ant would be
the size of pluto. No! I am not doing that No! Way. Not in a million years.
No comments:
Post a Comment
I really liked . . . because . . .
I really liked the way you . . .
I enjoyed reading this because . . .
It was especially good when you . . . because . . .
I think you need to . . . because . . .
Next time you write . . .
Think about adding . . .
Have you thought about . . .
To improve your . . . try . . .
Perhaps you could . . .