Wednesday, 1 August 2018

W2 T3

Yay, it's finally the weekend! I bounded out of bed and threw open the curtains. It's raining outside! I ran downstairs to my mum and she exclaimed "it had been raining all morning". Ugh, I thought to myself. Out of all the days it had to be today, the day of the EGSP (Epic Girl Slumber Party). We were going to sleep out under the stars, what will I do now? Just then a flash went across my eyes, I looked out my window to find the sun peeping out and no rain. Guess my day wasn't ruined after all.
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  1. Anonymous7 August 2018 at 13:55

    I like the way you use questions to express your anxiety, so that I can see your expression.

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