Sunday, 12 August 2018

100WC T3 W4

"Who stole my lip stick"! The words screech out of my sisters mouth making my ears ache. "Olivia I bet it was you". She storms into my room and starts to yell, the words boom out of her mouth. Every word that comes out is like a little shower of spit and it keeps splashing in my face. I wasn't listening to a word she was saying so when she stopped yelling and asked me if I did it, I had no idea what she was even talking about . So I said "Why would I do that"? She glares at me.

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