"I sat here, my legs are trembling, I never knew that the principles office could be so terrifying. Suddenly Mr Renald walks in.
"I think you know quite clearly why you are in here, what you two did was very irresponsible, especially you Jessica.
'Oh no, I'm dead. I never thought that just cutting off a bit of her hair could get me into so much trouble, why did I do that?"
"I expect better from you two, I will be giving your parents a call, now go back to class."
"Oh no, what are my parents going to say...?"
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