Wednesday, 29 August 2018
Sang Woo L Descriptive Writing
The skies are dark. In the middle of the sea, there is alonely - looking light house. Behind the light house, masive storms are coming. Suddenly, the bright light appears in the gray clouds and starts to rain. The light house looks fearful. Massive storms and huge waves hit the light house with bangs. Now light house is soaking wet, looks like its crying.
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