I don't think I have ever been so nervous before.
It was my first day at Southwell. Somehow I felt as if I had fallen down a few hundred flights of stairs.Once I arrived in class, all of my queer ideas floated away. Everyone appeared so open to the idea of me being there. Soon enough I was informed about Chapel. I did struggle to understand, but I went with the river. I believed I was safe until I was called up for a school emblem. In front of 600 pairs of prying eyes, I felt like an undercooked, neon pink Salmon.
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