Sunday, 5 August 2018
T3 W2 100WC
Today was a strange day it had been raining all morning but there was not a single cloud in the sky then at ll o'clock at night the sun was still shining bright. In the morning it was dark and still it didn't get bright till half past 2. We had to change the times of the clocks so we could get back to our normal lives it took sometime a week or 2 but then just as we were getting into the flow of things the light went back to the normal time. all of that was just a big daylight savings
2 comments:
I really liked . . . because . . .
I really liked the way you . . .
I enjoyed reading this because . . .
It was especially good when you . . . because . . .
I think you need to . . . because . . .
Next time you write . . .
Think about adding . . .
Have you thought about . . .
To improve your . . . try . . .
Perhaps you could . . .
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
I like the way you said what was happening all the time.
ReplyDeleteJust remember to use capital letters after a full stop.
i like the way at the start you hooked the reader in. After the words "normal lives" you might want to add a comma though.
ReplyDelete