Monday, 20 August 2018
Harry T3 W5
So I was lying in bed trying to convince my brain to go to sleep when a knock echoed from my window, the secret knock. Hauling up the window I asked "Ti's a cold night tonight"To my relief the correct response replied "Then why don't you sleep in the oven". Then a small envelope slipped through the window and onto the floor. The dark figure slipped away back into the shadows. As I read the contents of the letter I was aware of the smile on my face. Dear mister rogue you have been reappointed to the CIA congratulation's.
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This was a very good story and it was very gripping yet it still had some humor. I would recommend going over your punctuation though as I think you spelt it wrong in it.
ReplyDeleteThis is a humorous article, but there are some small spelling mistakes.
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