Tuesday, 21 August 2018
100 Word Challenge T3 W5
It was 1968. The car pulled up to the driveway and I hopped out. Work had been getting worse and worse as it went on. I was in debt to a lot of people for doing some bad stuff but that's another story. Anyway, just a couple of days ago I had spent the rest of my money on the lottery. I went over to my letterbox and for the first time in a while I had mail. As I read the contents of the mail I was aware of the smile on my face. I had won the lottery!
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I really liked the way you didn't tell us the full story kind of keeping it so you can make a sequel.
ReplyDeletenext time you write maybe add some dialogue.
Really good story and it really painted an image in your head. I do think that you should underline or bold the text that we had to use as I think it will let us know how you came up with the ides.
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