BANG! I woke up from a deep sleep to find that there were planes flying over us. All I can here is BANG. Are we getting bombed i thought to my self?
I quickly run into my parents and wake them up, but before i could get there was another BANG! I heard it again but this time much closer. Then I realised our house was getting bombed.
I quickly run into my parents room and wake them up.
“Were getting bombed” I said. “We need to get outside” said my dad. “Why would I do that? We will die!”
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